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I wrote this novella back in the Autumn of 2009, and since then I've been going back to edit it, add details... now it just sits on the shelf. Nobody except myself has read it. I know there are some errors and everyday I come up with ideas of how to make it better, but I need people to see what I have and give me their input. I've already published it on Amazon Kindle for people to have access to what I have, but no one has read it yet nor given feedback. I need other writers and readers and people who don't know me to give their honest take on my little 100 page story. It would be greatly appreciated. It's a novella called "MATH".

 

It does have language, adult themes, including a crime against a 16-year-old child. Just be warned.

 

http://amzn.com/B00ZMIOUU6

 

https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1176601

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Look if you wish on amazon.com fore my Last name in: () Here is its for you. (Abolfathi) or (ABOLFATHI) You'll see one written by Farid which is boring as **** to the Market in a **** Can! My Books are mostly real and Adult Contents galore. If you are offended by my Books? Don't order them! That's my only answer to your situation as I am protected under the First Amendment Freedom of Speech! So Do Not Flame me or I'll retaliate far worse!

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storms

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 8, 2015

as the rain falls an soft whispers of your nme pass my mind...i wish i understood why you left...still here waiting for you to call...the days feel like monhs an weeks turn to years...staying up at night wondering what went wrong...my love for you still bets in my herart like an indian war drum...you are my everything and more...the sacrifice id make...if you only knew how you light my world...fill my life with joy...if you only kneq what you mean to me...if you only knew that i love you...

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eternal

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 8, 2015

as the stars above sparkle against the midnight sky it makes me think of you...how those beautiful eyes of yours as they shimmer....drawing me closer with each gaze...heavens angels brought me to you an from that day on ive promised to love an care for you....like no other man has before with you i will not be a liar...but always keep you whole...nothing you will fear for im here, forever an always...my hearts one desire, the one i care about most of all...i love you with all my heart....you shall forever an always hold the key to my heart babe...

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spark

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 7, 2015

sunshine is glowing...my hearts pounding...your eyes set my emotions a blaze as i think about how no one but you has made me a better man...how truly blessed to have you a smat woman like you in my life....you alone are the holder of the key to my heart....the light of my darkest days an the one to always keep me smiling no matter what....if your 5 feet or on the other side of the world, we will always be together in our hearts....ill always be when you call...no body makes me feel like i do when im with you babe....the things you do to my head....the way you tell me you love me...my arms are your castle walls always there to hold you tight an keep you warm...

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riches

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 7, 2015

i have no money only love to give....with my love as my guide an you by my side ill always find my way....as i think of you my mind explodes with joy as i rember the times we have spent together....my heart pounds like an indian war drum, my stomach fills with butterflies as i hold you in my arms an sing melodies of my love for you....as the time goes by the ecstasy builds stronger an stronger as the days come an go....you are my true hearts desire the one i cherish most of all...like the star filled night my heart is filled wtih endless bliss...

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fire

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 7, 2015

your love is the wood to my furance never a flicker, endlssy glowing like the sun above....when i look ino your eyes i see the stars that shimmer an light up the night skies...as i gaze upon your beauty i smile, my mind goes crazy, an m heart takes off liike a jet...as i wrap these arms of mine around you times seems to fade...love is all that rins...for your are my hearts one desire the one i care about most of all....the holder of the key to my heart...light of my world....i love you more than anything babe....if my love turned to water the word would drown...if it turned into a star the  universe would be light up like a christmas tree...if it turned into a fire no wind strong enough could extinguish it...nor the hot burning love i have for you babe...

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rain

Posted by DrLove21 Jun 7, 2015

as the rain falls it sounds like the piter pater of little feet......the lightning roars like a lion....as we lay there watchin......listenin.....each rain drop is another day i have fallen for you......a memory of our dying love....a reason why i love you.....for in your eyes i see stars shinning bright.....the warm glow of your smile fills me with endless bliss......the ecstasy grows stronger an stronger with passin day.....you are the love of my life...the one id choose overall......the stars on my darkest nights....the beacon of my unwaivering love....holder of the key to my heart....my hearts one true desire, the one i care about most of all....never will i break your heart....in sickness or in health im yours, in this life or the next always keeping your whole....as i look in your beautiful eyes i say i love you, as i kiss you in the rain

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