Torq brings in a tray with deep cups of sweet, comforting tea. "Cynthia also left a review for you on your most unfortuitous tale."
Here is my preview for review. https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1100899
Better than all that reconversion stuff, I just posted the first 3 pages of my book on my blog. That should make things much easier. http://dmgermain.blogspot.ca/2012/04/first-3-pages.html
What a preview!! I'll be completely honest, at first I looked at the cover (not trying to be mean but it kind of looks like a cheap 80's sitcom) and then read the intro and that didn't help.
I thought "great a story about aliens the last thing I can ever relate to" I always try to review previews regardless of it looks like i won't like them, and then not focus on the content but specifics (i.e. too long, not enough intro etc.)
However your story is so touching. I found myself sympathizing with the aliens! good job bro. Not only that but you gave just right amount of intro, prolouge (maybe a little long with chapter, but then again people who will be checking it out like to read) and you gave a long comment section. Your preview should serve as example of what previews should look like. I was very impressed.
Please check out my brand new preview (just made it right now) please give an honest review, don't give me a good review just because I did:
Anyone else down to check it out please do.
guys, please check out my new preview:
"Cheap 80's sitcom." LOL! No offense taken. It's kind of what I was going for. Nanu Nanu!
I had fun doing it. I liked how the jeans and leather jacket came out and the metallic android skin tone.
I somehow didn't see your feedback the other day. Has worked on the description on the preview. Thanks for the reply.
Btw, today is free Kindle day. You can download a Pheng iu: The Bizarre Adventure of Atom-Boy and Uncle-Man.
Here's the synopsis:
Pheng iu is doing a movie! In a rare occasion where so many talents happen to stay under one roof, cinematographer Willem and scriptwriter Robin produce a superheroes flick: The Bizarre Adventure Of Atom-Boy And Uncle-Man.
The movie tells a thorough story about the rise and fall of superheroes, from the simpler time where vigilantes are running around until a darker era where even superheroes are rejected and killed. Showcasing the supers such as Kung Fu, Atom-Boy and Uncle-Man, with Mark playing the most dangerous villain called Trademark, this one is certainly not to be missed!
And here's the link:
OK, Brick Man - Here's a Historical Fiction preview I have jsut finished posting on CreateSpace.
Be interested in what you think!
Please share your thoughts. This is just the beginning.
I'm new here but would love some feedback. Short preview, only the beginning of a book idea.
Just a gentle reminder that you still haven't review the preview of my book like the title of this thread says you will. Here's the link to the first 3 pages: http://dmgermain.blogspot.ca/2012/04/first-3-pages.html
They're right there for all to see. No downloads necessary. Also, remember the credo: read it first THEN react to it. Doing that process backwards (or skipping to part 2) does not help anyone.
Haha cool thank you. It really is a trip what appeals to people, I've posted a few sections about my drug smuggling mentor, homlessness, a drug overdose, but the most popular of them all: two stories about card games lol