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560 Views 3 Replies Last post: Oct 30, 2017 2:03 PM by Phoenix61 RSS
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Oct 28, 2017 12:37 PM

Will someone take a look and advise on age level, plz?

Hi,

 

I'm writing a series of humorous Catholic books for tweens.  I don't have kids, so I'd appreciate any feedback you could give me regarding:

 

1.  What age group would you recommend it for?

2.  Was it engaging?  Was it funny?

3.  General comments

 

Please use the "Look Inside" feature for the snapshot.  And thanks!

 

https://www.amazon.com/HoLY-miSaDveNTuRes-aUGusTInE-1/dp/1976381533/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1509218738&sr=8-1&keywords=religious+humor+books+noskewicz

 

Linda

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1. Oct 28, 2017 1:20 PM in response to: Auggie-Doggie
Re: Will someone take a look and advise on age level, plz?

I didn't get past the description. Here's a tip: Paragraphs are your friends.

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2. Oct 28, 2017 2:56 PM in response to: Lorem_Ipsum
Re: Will someone take a look and advise on age level, plz?

You did good, I gave up after figuring out the title.  Why somebody would do that to the title of their book is just beyond me!  Of course,  I am referring to the random upper and lower case.  I also noticed $36 for a 180 page book - WHEW!  Out of my price range - 20 cents a page!!!

 

Dan'l

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3. Oct 30, 2017 2:03 PM in response to: Auggie-Doggie
Re: Will someone take a look and advise on age level, plz?

I recommend no age group for your book as it is so poorly written with glaring grammatical errors. Your blurb is far too long. The only part of your book I liked is that you admit the book is fiction. I think you are totally off your holy rocker to think you can sell this book for the amount you ask! ABSURD!

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