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Jan 26, 2018 1:44 PM

Will you Please review and rate my preview?

Greetings My Fellow Authors,

I am Vernita Simmons but you can call me Neat. Will you Please rate and view my Prieview of my Book: "Families Thriving I A Broken World - Inspirations Empowering Families Through Every Season?" I apprecite your feed back. Here is the Link:http:// https://www.createspace.com/Preview/1238558 Thank you kindly.

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1. Jan 26, 2018 2:00 PM in response to: MajesticWorshiper
Re: Will you Please review and rate my preview?

I did not make it through the first paragraph!

 

My heavens.

 

Family Thriving in a Broken World is a 

timely publication that's time driving in the 

critical situation our world is and family is 

missing their role in shaping home and 

God-centered parenting approach towards 

a better world -Adigun Temitayo 

President of Wheels of Hope Rising 

Foundation

 

Does this make sense to anybody, even you, the author?  Maybe it's a quote, but I cannot believe that anybody would state anything in such a broken way and that somebody else would quote it.

 

After that, every paragraph which I glanced at mentions God.  Good luck to you and your God book.

 

Dan'l

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2. Jan 26, 2018 10:53 PM in response to: MajesticWorshiper
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I couldn't get to your preview for some reason, so I went to your book site on Amazon for a 'Look Inside'. HERE  I am very sorry I did. I managed to get as far as this sentence: "Most assuredly, this makes developing a relational relationship difficult." .

 

I think you should stick to praying and leave the writing to authors who have honed their craft or have engaged the services of a competent editor. I rate the preview on Amazon at minus10 out of 10. Be thankful that I did not leave a scathing review on Amazon as that would stick with you forever. The writing was so flawed it was embarrassing.

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3. Jan 26, 2018 11:00 PM in response to: Phoenix61
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Joe, you must overcome this tendency of yours to sugarcoat things. It makes you sound wishy-washy.

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4. Jan 29, 2018 12:41 PM in response to: Lorem_Ipsum
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She asked for criticism and she got it.

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5. Jan 29, 2018 1:07 PM in response to: thestoryguy
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I am but a foil on which the Bard may hone his rapier-like wit.

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